tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post1271925784240209912..comments2013-06-17T21:39:16.733-07:00Comments on DemMangoes: Andrewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01426242485625656957noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post-83181948847106575952012-10-21T13:29:13.615-07:002012-10-21T13:29:13.615-07:00I really liked that you added a picture to your po...I really liked that you added a picture to your post. That is one advanctage for blogging over writing on paper in that you can add video, photos, other references and texts to make your post more appealing to your audience. When doing so, please try to remember to credit your source unless you are using material from Creative Commons.<br />Your post has some strenths with specific facts and details as well as your opinion throughout. May I use this post in class to model (show)some editing skills that will strengthen your writing and those of your peers? Ms Leeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14425588470747075365noreply@blogger.com