tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post4819365428330241102..comments2013-06-17T21:39:16.733-07:00Comments on DemMangoes: Speech DraftAndrewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01426242485625656957noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post-81284522822544241832013-03-06T08:37:01.194-08:002013-03-06T08:37:01.194-08:00I really enjoyed how you gave me both pros and con...I really enjoyed how you gave me both pros and cons of composting! It definantly made me think of how i should act at home. watch out for run-on senetnces. You can replace and start your sentences with "perhaps and Although"! Five paragraphs may put you over time so try cutting some stuff out! Overall good job on word choice!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16753993594139767342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post-69171308224636528852013-02-26T21:24:55.319-08:002013-02-26T21:24:55.319-08:00I really enjoy this! I think if you'd add in a...I really enjoy this! I think if you'd add in a quote, it'd make it a bit more interesting. Also, a way to solve the animal problem would be very neat. I think composting is a great speech topic, with Surrey starting do compost and whatnot.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06593968750205023625noreply@blogger.com