tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post6999189484947638533..comments2013-06-17T21:39:16.733-07:00Comments on DemMangoes: No Red Pill .No Blue PillAndrewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01426242485625656957noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post-15065315560447695332013-03-15T12:30:43.376-07:002013-03-15T12:30:43.376-07:00Hey Olivia,
This was very well explained and extr...Hey Olivia,<br /><br />This was very well explained and extremely informative. I liked how you sort of added titles to each of your paragraphs. Try not to write too much in your paragraphs though because it could lead to listing.Eddy Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05454158859488127567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1638918391005027628.post-26274934872847310412013-03-14T19:27:12.037-07:002013-03-14T19:27:12.037-07:00You wrote a lot and explained the article well. Th... You wrote a lot and explained the article well. The one thing i would suggest you do is not make it sound like it's in point form at the beginning and write a sentence instead. I completely agree with your opinion and your point of view. It was a great post!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16279981512302338771noreply@blogger.com